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The development of this essay (your ideas) is excellent.
Your reasoning in analytical thesis are of a high order.
It is unusual for someone who has developed a high
level thinking skill to have a problem punctuating sentences.
Your reasoning in analytical thesis are of a high order.
It is unusual for someone who has developed a high
level thinking skill to have a problem punctuating sentences.
Here we go again. That was on the front of my essay that I wrote in class yesterday in less than 50 minutes. When I got to class today my teacher said, "I haven't officially graded these papers, but I gave them a check, check minus or check plus. I have put some question marks on the papers for people who I feel may not grasp the issues we will be covering."
As she said this her eyes lingered on me. I knew something was up. The paper was on the topic, "Pick an part of your life that you feel helped develop yourself as an individual." I decided to write about my being held back and how it impeded my social skills and has therefore created what you read before you.
Now this is an English 2 class, but this woman is a smart, I can tell. If it were some boring teacher I wouldn't have been so effected. I never expected a comment like that. This woman is a what I hope to achieve when I'm older. Powder white hair, always wears lose fitting shirts because she doesn't wear a bra. She keeps herself up to date on technology, runs websites and other such things. I google'd her and found out that she won 7.5 million dollars (not for herself) when she brought a law suit to the CUNY system in the 70s dealing with their discrimination and fair treatment for female teachers.
I may not go to a prestigious school like NYU or Columbia where I pay up the nose, but CUNY actually has some pretty awesome teachers.
She both gave me a great backhanded compliment, that on cue has shaken me. Granted I never proof read in class essays. (Do I REALLY proof read anything?) So that was ultimately my fault. She continued that she noticed I left early. But, if it is a persistent problem I should meet with her to "eliminate is from your writing." I'm touched and had to laugh out loud the moment I read this comment.
Oh the ghosts of my past are coming back at me again this evening. Though I am hardly upset anymore. I'd rather have a high level of thinking and horrible punctuation, than be a great (technical) writer with no original thought.
You said it's unusual for someone of a high level of thinking to have problems punctuating sentences?
As Tom Jones once said, "It's not unusual..." Now you can say it too!
As she said this her eyes lingered on me. I knew something was up. The paper was on the topic, "Pick an part of your life that you feel helped develop yourself as an individual." I decided to write about my being held back and how it impeded my social skills and has therefore created what you read before you.
Now this is an English 2 class, but this woman is a smart, I can tell. If it were some boring teacher I wouldn't have been so effected. I never expected a comment like that. This woman is a what I hope to achieve when I'm older. Powder white hair, always wears lose fitting shirts because she doesn't wear a bra. She keeps herself up to date on technology, runs websites and other such things. I google'd her and found out that she won 7.5 million dollars (not for herself) when she brought a law suit to the CUNY system in the 70s dealing with their discrimination and fair treatment for female teachers.
I may not go to a prestigious school like NYU or Columbia where I pay up the nose, but CUNY actually has some pretty awesome teachers.
Meanwhile.
She both gave me a great backhanded compliment, that on cue has shaken me. Granted I never proof read in class essays. (Do I REALLY proof read anything?) So that was ultimately my fault. She continued that she noticed I left early. But, if it is a persistent problem I should meet with her to "eliminate is from your writing." I'm touched and had to laugh out loud the moment I read this comment.
You are an idiot savant.
Oh the ghosts of my past are coming back at me again this evening. Though I am hardly upset anymore. I'd rather have a high level of thinking and horrible punctuation, than be a great (technical) writer with no original thought.
You said it's unusual for someone of a high level of thinking to have problems punctuating sentences?
Hello, how do you do.
As Tom Jones once said, "It's not unusual..." Now you can say it too!
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